Pure

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Wraith (Prince of Chaos) on Friday, 23-Jun-2006 14:02:13

Pure innocence in thy angel eyes,

Beauty wrought in divine being of grace;

As a dove on gentle current flies:

Serenity in thy angel face.



Pure be thy angel voice that sings,

Harmony wrought in resounding song;

As a harp whose music brings

Serenity to those who've toiled long.



Oh falling tears that stain thy angel skin,

Leaving trails of moisture to mar tann'd flesh;

As a seamstress who at her loom may spin,

But by some mistake create tangles in her mesh.



Oh unrequited love that rends thy angel heart,

And thereby evoking the maiden's crying;

As an arrow when loosed shall depart

Hunter's bow to fell some pheasant flying.



Now my shoulder for thy angel arms,

To encompass and therein find some respite;

As a troubled maiden with all her charms,

Findeth shelter in her knight though wind's may buffet.



Now my embrace of thy angel being,

To warm thee in night chilled by frost;

As a deer from some terror fleeing,

Finds safety in forest's embrace till danger lost.



Pure innocence in thy angel soul,

Divine being of unparalleled grace;

As a valiant knight who strives against the whole,

Just to find peace in sweet angel's embrace.



Pure is your heart, so cry no longer.

It's tearing you apart, but I'll make you stronger.

Pure is your name, so let the hurt now end.

Have no shame, trust in a friend.



Kai

Post 2 by laced-unlaced (Account disabled) on Friday, 23-Jun-2006 14:29:29

i like it

Post 3 by HauntedReverie (doing the bad mango) on Saturday, 24-Jun-2006 13:21:54

I think this is the first poem of yours that I understood Kai. Definetly one of my favorites by you. I love it when you write. You're amazing

Post 4 by blbobby (Ooo you're gona like this!) on Saturday, 24-Jun-2006 13:28:28

In my opinion, this should be sung accompanied by a lute.
It's nice.

Post 5 by Grace (I've now got the ggold prolific poster award! wahoo! well done to me!) on Monday, 26-Jun-2006 15:03:34

…Hoping that you mind not Kai that a few lines here and there of this beautiful writing you have penned I may speak forth a few words from my heart, my spirit, my soul, my inner all that I am for memory takes me on a flight of journey when mentioned name of “Grace” I encounter…

Post 6 by Colombian Coke (Veteran Zoner) on Monday, 26-Jun-2006 17:01:44

that's like shakespeare,I like it